How to Write Authentic Copy that Sells (Part 1 of 2)

How to Write Authentic Copy that Sells (Part 1 of 2)

Fabienne Fredrickson
February 15, 2013

Have you ever thought about what it takes to attract ideal clients and customers who happily buy when you’re not in front of them?  Today, I’d like to share some best practices with you that I use and that my clients now use to write marketing copy that sells.

Copy is infinitely important in your business. Why? Because it clones and replaces you in the sales process. It’s a way for you to multiply your reach without extra effort. And it touches EVERY single part of your business—your ezine, your website, your sales pages, your mailing campaigns, your social media, your video—EVERYTHING. (Click here to tweet this.)

You want to be able to write AMAZING and COMPELLING copy. It is a tool you can use that allows you to sell with authenticity, integrity and love. Now you might be saying right now—did I hear her correctly? Did she say love? Yes, LOVE.

Here’s the deal. In your heart, you want to take what you do in your business and get it out there in a really BIG way. Awesome, authentic copy is one way you can take your message to the masses. Marketing copy is the vehicle. When done well—with love—copy is a divine tool that allows you to be of service to others.

One of the biggest compliments a prospect can give me is to say, “Fabienne, when I read your email I felt like you were talking directly to me. You articulated exactly what I am feeling, exactly what I wanted and you showed me exactly how you were going to give it to me. And you were so real and so authentic. I couldn’t wait to buy what you were offering.”

The best news is that it’s not that difficult to be able to write copy that gets your prospects to respond in this way. In today’s strategy video, I’d like to walk you through my first 4 strategies for writing authentic copy that sells. You’ll see that once you’re able to sink into your heart a little bit, the process is actually quite magical.

1. Set the Intention. Everything is energy—including marketing copy. So, I want you to get in a place of LOVING that person who you are writing to before you put pen to paper or even think about tapping away on your keyboard. Get into a good space first—in whatever way that works for you. For me, that means taking some time to reflect and light my favorite scented candle in a calm and peaceful setting so that I can tune in to my inner guidance and hear what it has to say.

You want to make sure you are aligned with the intention of serving, not taking. Come from a place of abundance rather than scarcity. Desperation (“I’ve just gotta make the sale”) repels abundance so focus instead on faith and service.

2. Know who you’re writing to. Choose your muse. You want to write to one particular person—think of your ideal client who really ‘gets’ you and buys everything you offer, or a longtime client you would want to clone. That’s the person who you need to write to. Make your reader feel that you’re only talking to him or her—and only him or her. And be sure to use your authentic voice.

3. Clearly define your objective. What is it that you want your reader to do after reading your copy? Are you trying to make a sale, have him or her fill out the boxes on your website, call you? You need to know the exact action you want your reader to take.

4. Write from the heart. This may not come naturally to you—at first. But in reality, this is the most natural thing that we can do in our business because all you have to do is BE YOURSELF. You want to connect with your reader—heart to heart.

Make that person feel valued and important. Use empathy wherever possible. Be compassionate. Be reassuring. Acknowledge their pain. Treat them as if you would treat a friend. Be conversational and talk to them about their deepest aspirations (rather than about the offer.)

Take a stand for your reader and their success. Talk to them about where they are now, where they want to be, what’s possible for them and how you can help them get there. Be vulnerable if it’s appropriate, show your passion and for goodness sake, don’t be boring!

Your Client Attraction Assignment

Your Assignment for this week is to give these first 4 strategies a try. It may take some practice—especially if you’re not used to writing in your authentic voice, but once you really learn to sink into your heart and just let your thoughts and feelings flow, you’ll see that being authentic actually takes less of an effort than pretending to be someone you’re not.

Stay tuned for next week’s video, where I’ll go through the very last step in my authentic sales copy strategy, which includes the practical parts of sales copy that you must include if you want your reader to take action.



  • Thank you so much for this terrific advice, Fabienne! Another awesome video. It’s really become very obvious to me just how important it is to know to whom you’re speaking and to speak TO them and WITH them, not AT them. Also, coming from a place of right-intention is so key, too. I’m grateful to you for once again reminding me of these oh-so important things that make such a difference!

    • Such a nice note, thank you! It’s true, your audience really wants to connect with you, and know your intention is truly to be of service to them.

  • I love the “with love” part. Most people do want to feel like you are talking directly to them and that you really care about helping them. People who feel cared for will respond caringly,if you will, towards you.

    • That’s so true Ginger, I try to run with business and marketing with as much love as I can, and I believe that has been a big part of my success. Thank you for your comment!

  • Yaritza

    Very very helpful!!! Thank you.

    • Glad it was helpful to you. This system is the one I use to write my copy, and it works well 🙂 Sending you big hugs!

  • mspropertygirl

    I LOVE this! This is great content Fabienne! When I used similar principals in my morning meditation I find that I am able to serve my clients more joyfully and my inquiries and conversions increase! Thank you for showing me another way to incorporate SERVICE and HEART into my business!

    (PS – The shadow on this video creates a love heart or angel wings affect on the wall behind you – there are no co-incidences!)

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